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Feelings
Contributed by
-Sinner-
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Monday, 23rd March 2009 @ 10:46:15 PM in AEST
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You say that you don't feel anything,
that there is nothing going on inside.
But I see your smile,
I hear your tears.
There are deep pools of feelings inside,
not empty barrels,
but full pools with no bottom,
waiting to come out.
Your laughter plays across my ears,
and I know your smiling.
That there is joy inside,
just screaming to come out.
I see the tears that run down your cheeks,
I see the sorrow that fills your heart.
That there is much pain,
in this hurt soul.
I see the anger in your eyes,
like great fires dancing to get out.
But I know your in control,
and that it will never burn anyone but who deserves it.
I feel the love inside of you,
for everyone that is close to your heart.
How your heart has a open door,
and is always ready to be there for a soul in need.
I see the mischief inside,
like a little girl wanting to prank a friend.
I know there is fun to be had,
whenever you are near.
I see the little girl,
who thinks she has no feelings.
I know this is not true for how can someone not feel,
yet make so many feel so many things.
I see all sides of you,
and know that this is all you are.
And I among many accept you for you,
don't you think its time to accept you too?
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Re: Feelings
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th March 2009 @ 03:28:40 PM AEST
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very good indeed. i particularly liked this bit:
I see the little girl,
who thinks she has no feelings.
I know this is not true for how can someone not feel,
yet make so many feel so many things.
you exhibited great eloquence and logic with these words, awesome writing.
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