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When
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
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When I feel your hate it warms my soul.
When I taste your love it seems so cold.
When I hear your thoughts I throw them away.
When you stand your ground, i make you sway.
When your not around i'm at peace.
When your starting to argue i find my keys.
When you say I love you I walk away.
When you ask why I say i was lead astray.
When you show your emotions I ask why.
When you want to apologize i say i'd rather die.
When you want an answer I make you cry.
When you want something done I never try.
When there is a lesson to be taught, in this poem.
When the lesson is love, and that your never alone.
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Re: When
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 09:09:09 AM AEST
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| Your mother is wise! Listen to her,be with her,talk with her,I wish my mom was there so I could still hear her yell at me! Christina |
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Re: When
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 01:58:00 PM AEST
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i was a little lost on this one but i like your style..keep putting how you feel in words it helps greatly.
Sharon |
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Re: When
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by PhantomsLDY on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:14:26 PM AEST
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| Your Mom loves you even when you don't think so. I know I get mad at Kim sometimes but I love her non the less and I'm sur your Mom feels the same way. this wa a very good write too! |
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Re: When
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by Trisha on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:30:53 AM AEST
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| Kim, You only have one mother. YES were young but are parents have been though this before us. There not Perfect there just leading us in the right path. |
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Re: When
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by PhantomsBBYgrl on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 06:21:14 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem but don't talk about your mom like that shes a really nice person and she loves you so much! |
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Re: When
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by Desi on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:26:05 AM AEST
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| Do you have some resentment towards your mother? I think you should try to be nicer, she brought you into this world, she can take you out. |
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Re: When
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by kims4ever on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 09:50:08 PM AEST
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| listen if you read the poem you will realize that it is about a typical teenager and how they treat thier mothers. And that no matter how bad it gets or how u treat them they will always be there for you. |
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