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The Burning of Most of Eldore Except for the Rich Parts Which are Surrounded...
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
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Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 02:11:48 PM in AEST
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Dragons dragons all around
I see people all abound
I see people all a-soaring
Fires raging
Dragons roaring
Houses crumble at the sight
People scream with all their might
Sheep are eaten
Straw is burnt
People whining that theyre hurt
Great destruction everywhere
Noble people laugh and stare
Peasants dying
Horses Flee
Glad the dragons dont see me
No no children go away
In this nice spot I will stay
All surrounded by fine brick
Find a savior
Im not it
Oh my Jesus theyve seen me!
Dragons flap against the breeze
Cant escape
Brick traps in
How ironic its an oven
The original account of the burning of Eldore stops abruptly at this point, severe burn marks were found on the latter half of the parchment. The peasant Jason Black has not been seen since.
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Re: The Burning of Most of Eldore Except for the Rich Parts Which are Surrounded...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 02:59:52 PM AEST
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interesting, intriguing write.
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Re: The Burning of Most of Eldore Except for the Rich Parts Which are Surrounded...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 05:31:09 PM AEST
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What a very cool story and I loved the flow.
Thank you very much for an enjoyable read.
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Re: The Burning of Most of Eldore Except for the Rich Parts Which are Surrounded...
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by Spike on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 06:46:48 PM AEST
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selfishness is never its own reward. Mmmm.. peasant pie.
a fun read, vivid imagery.
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