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I've dreamt about you
Contributed by
bluethewolf
on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 02:30:43 PM in AEST
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oops
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Starting in a toy store,
large stuffed animals,
bicycles and action figures
Ending up in a supermarket with family,
I know you're here,
I see you standing in the middle of an aisle
I trot over to you, we both smile shyly,
you buy a bag of potato chips,
and we make our way into the night air
Outside there is tennis courts,
there are bands playing and people picnicking,
fireworks and the night sky
We're running to our picnic blanket,
Looking up at you, I lose energy in my legs and can't move,
you smile, take my hand, and pull me on
Sitting, we watch lights flash and smoke float over the moon,
turning your head towards me you grin,
still holding my hand, you kiss my forehead and I wake
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2009-03-25 14:30:43]
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Re: I've dreamt about you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 02:57:35 PM AEST
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i loved all the different images in this, you described it so vividly. well done, an enjoyable read.
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Re: I've dreamt about you
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 05:24:46 PM AEST
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A very sweet dream and you did a very good job describing it poetically. Nice imagery. :-)
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Tim |
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Re: I've dreamt about you
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by elle on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 05:53:19 PM AEST
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| a most sweet dream. . . a treat to read. peace. elle |
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