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am i going to heaven of hell??
Contributed by
shanat
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Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 06:35:00 PM in AEST
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it`s not so easy going through here dying
i can see myself in the box, and everyone is crying
whoever through me in here is not very smart
i`m as stiff as a board and i smell like a fart!!
i apologise for the crudeness
but ive been like this all my life
and i`m sick and tired of all the rudeness!
oh yes now the priest is saying he`ll be terribly missed
well how bout you all drive me to the pub
celebrate and get *****
HA that`d be funny standin in front of god swayin and spewin
and him shakin his head saying "oh hell not again euan"
or even beta standin in front of the devil while he`s havin a bath
and him sayin "oh jesus christ euan you make me laugh"
but no your all gunna be boring and throw me in the ground sober
spose thinking about it i don`t think i could spend the rest of eternity completly hungover:)
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Re: am i going to heaven of hell??
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by shanat on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 06:43:13 PM AEST
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i`m sorry it was supossed to be am i going to
heaven OR hell. |
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Re: am i going to heaven of hell??
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 11:42:42 PM AEST
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You made me smile with this one.
I liked the different edge and twist on this write.
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Re: am i going to heaven of hell??
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:41:26 PM AEST
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Well you certainly have an unusual outlook on life.........or in this case, death lol.
Being drunk in front of your maker, now that's something you dont see people write about every day !!
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