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Don't you walk away
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 06:49:06 PM in AEST
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Don't you walk away
Listen to what I have to say
And I'm not done
I've only begun
All I want is for you to notice me
All I want is to be seen
I'm tired of being ignored
I'm sorry I make you bored
But that's no reason to walk away
before you even listen to what I have to say
I'm tired of sitting in the corner not being seen
I just want people to notice me
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Re: Don't you walk away
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 25th March 2009 @ 11:50:46 PM AEST
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I felt this one. You brought each feeling to life with these words. Touching write.
We all want to feel like we belong and that we are needed and wanted.
Do not sit in the corner get out of that corner!
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Re: Don't you walk away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 03:04:09 PM AEST
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very powerful writing, i guess we all just want to be noticed. good work.
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