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The fatality of life
Contributed by
MelancholicArtist
on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 05:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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How fatal is this life of ours
Callous, harsh, such cruel intent
Forced observance of our own decay
leaves solitary, lingering languishment
But beauty, too, contained within
So hard to find but worth the pain
The endless trial, the constant search
Could end in rapture or in vain
To those of us who suffer so
Gripped by unyielding mental sorrow
The world is impossibly, unbearably bleak
With only the promise of a bleaker tomorrow
But, yet, there dwells a trace of hope
Your own mortality you must forgive
The eventual end must spur us on
For death is that which makes us live.
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MelancholicArtist
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2009-03-26 17:17:36]
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Re: The fatality of life
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by shelby on
Thursday, 26th March 2009 @ 08:35:29 PM AEST
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You wrote a well described and written verse here.
Flow and meter splendid.
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Re: The fatality of life
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by venkat on
Friday, 27th March 2009 @ 04:34:26 AM AEST
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| wonderful or not, but beautiful flow and thought... welcome to this site. venkat |
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