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Trees
Contributed by
HoldOn
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Sunday, 29th March 2009 @ 12:15:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Life amidst pine trees
intertwining needles and leaves
golden orange these dying of age
and green with envy of life's first stage
wind blown, cracked, crippled, and torn
snapped limbs a upon which sap adorn
swaying masts scraping above head
pricking clouds to leak sun instead
bombardment below by pine cones and acorns
forest floor matted by each trees first born
stoically standing through the dull and the dark
patient with nature, these uniformed in bark
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2009-03-29 12:15:07]
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Re: Trees
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 07:42:29 AM AEST
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this is great writing. it's descriptive, fluid and eloquent. top stuff.
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