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FLAME
Contributed by
redwest802
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Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 09:33:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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You light my life but send me into darkness.
Your heat is my existence.
My food you cook,
I need you.
But when you are angry,
You destroy.
You take from man what you want,
You Rage against nature.
Nothing can stand in your path.
I try to control you,
But I cannot control a savagetame beast.
You are fire, you are freedom itself.
You are what you are,
You are flame.
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redwest802
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2009-03-30 21:33:13]
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Re: FLAME
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by venkat on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 11:17:10 PM AEST
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" Nothing can stand in your path.... you are freedom itself"..
Ah..this is inspiring..who ever praises flame sure he will be blessed with inspiration..
venkat
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Re: FLAME
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by Mars on
Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 03:05:58 PM AEST
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| Interesting, how you used "You are flame" instead of "You are [a] flame". I'll make a note of that. It makes flame seem like something more, like not a flame, but flame itself. Good job =P. |
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