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To my love
Contributed by
Urizen
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Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 04:39:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her hair is soft,
Her smile is kind,
She dwells within my heart and amid the darkest corners of my mind.
Her eyes; they shine brighter than those restless stars,
Her kisses ease my pain,
Her touch heals my scars.
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Urizen
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2009-03-31 16:39:09]
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Re: To my love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 04:57:52 PM AEST
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Beautiful and sweet. I found myself exceptionally pensive upon reading
your third line. Inside the heart is far from the darkest corners of one's mind,
but it speaks volumes to the love that resides there. To fill the body and soul
this ample, it must be of immense gravity.
Lovely. Just lovely ~
~ Breezy
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