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This Afternoon
Contributed by
PreciousKitten
on
Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 09:34:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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this afternoon
a mellow mood
has over come the day
this afternoon
a force so strong
that it has its way of
staying
when you are in a mellow mood
and you honestly don't know want to do
just hang out
this afternoon
when you have a good friend
never leave them alone
hang out with them
this afternoon
this afternoon
causes for a celebration
to enjoy life while we can
this afternoon
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2009-03-31 21:34:21]
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Re: This Afternoon
(User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 01:09:27 PM AEST
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| A gentle and relaxing piece. Shame some of the grammar and punctuation let it down. Never mind I still enjoyed the mood. |
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