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Eternity
Contributed by
BlackRoses00
on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eternity is trapped within a heartbeat,
As sorrow fills a crystal tear.
I can hear each breath you take,
And it would chase away my fear.
Your face is painted upon my heart,
To strengthen me each day.
And your kiss still burns my lips,
So I'm never sure what to say.
Mesmerizing within your soft eyes,
As they sparkle and glitter.
The spirit of a stallion wihin you,
For neither of us shall become a quitter.
Here I stand upon a transparent bridge,
Built of stone; never let me fall.
I will always stand with you,
And love and keep you through it all.
-Joey-
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BlackRoses00
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2003-03-25 17:45:00]
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Re: Eternity
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by Sexygirl on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:56:54 PM AEST
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| Wow.....you have written something so nice....she will be so lucky to be in your arms....I really liked this one.... |
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Re: Eternity
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by darkkai on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:33:06 PM AEST
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watch out fantasies can come true. who ever she is, she is gonna be happy with you.
keep up the writes |
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Re: Eternity
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:29:55 PM AEST
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| beautiful............... |
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Re: Eternity
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:59:33 AM AEST
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Beautiful! I especially love the last stanza! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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