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Everything's a Lie
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 07:08:13 PM in AEST
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When youve had a bad day
And people want you to say
Whats wrong with you
I cant make words to tell them what Im going through.
I just cant seem to tell you why
Why I sit here and cry
I dont know if Im just sad
Or if Im going mad
Lately I just cant tell
All I know nothing seems real but life is hell
One real thing stands out and thats time
It goes by so slow in my mind
Slowly driving me insane
But it brings me to reality
To take away the pain
So that I dont have to face with the morality
That everything is a lie
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-04-02 19:08:13]
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Re: Everything's a Lie
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by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 08:56:00 PM AEST
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It's sad but it has your pazaz.
Great writing.
huggs, blessings, hope,
emy |
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Re: Everything's a Lie
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 09:49:47 PM AEST
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Emotional torture
always
knocks us down... |
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Re: Everything's a Lie
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 05:51:17 PM AEST
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great writing, i think many people could relate to this.
-phil |
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Re: Everything's a Lie
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by 12161216 on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 01:09:15 PM AEST
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| A little dull in the flow, but overall good. I can relate to you, and the emotions can be felt. |
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Re: Everything's a Lie
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by keikori on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 04:01:57 PM AEST
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| reality strikes hard..everything IS a lie, well done, you have a good mind, and great writing |
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