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Real or Fake
Contributed by
kwood003
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Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:54:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Are you people real
Are you people fake
All i do is give
All you do is take
Are you real
Are you fake
Why is my heart
The one you choose to break
Who am i to judge you
If all life is a lie
What am i to do
My thoughts are better left for dead
Locked away inside my head
Am i real
Am i fake
How much more can i take
Before all love turns to hate
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kwood003
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2009-04-03 03:54:25]
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Re: Real or Fake
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 04:11:40 PM AEST
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it had a nice flow, good job.
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Re: Real or Fake
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by emystar on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 12:13:33 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, our global family.
That's how it starts. Welcome to the jungle of poetry etc.
You have talent on loan from God. Go with it. It's really enlightening.
More please?
Huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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