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Carousel Of The Emotionally Insane
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:44:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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It's really strange
how I am starting to feel
Intense pain as I bleed,
It's overwhelming
when your eyes are open
and you can't tell what is real.
I cry for help
as I fall down
and emotional vampires drink deeply
as my essence flows,
I never scream
or shout out
that's not aloud
in the underworld.
A sudden rush
confusion explodes everywhere
the army of darkness
screams
fill the air...
my adrenalin is flowing
as the battle rages
into a chaotic nightmare
that wobbles
spinning
like a broken carousel.
Laughing hyenas
and
crippled pilgrims
are slowly transforming
as
they retreat back
into the shadows,
I tingle in sensations
I pause I tremble
as the landscape changes
and new episode unfolds.
Everything is peaceful
everything is so beautiful,
I no longer notice
the emotional vampires feeding
as my essence flows.
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unknown_utopia
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2009-04-03 15:44:34]
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Re: Carousel Of The Emotionally Insane
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 03:54:33 PM AEST
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this is a string of fantastic metaphors bound together. i particularly love the 'emotional vampires', that works really well and combines imagery with conceptional thinking. i loved it. 5/5.
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