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Guilty
Contributed by
DukeW
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Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 05:22:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My beloved pain has betrayed me!
So I am dead, but to what degree?
I have shed my blood, dropped my tears.
Mourned the passing of my soul years.
But now the sun shines once more,
And I feel rotten, to my very core.
My soul has risen from the dead.
I stand once more on the ground on witch I bled.
Is this the devils trickery?
A fragment of a dream, or reality.
My love! I have bled for you,
I loved you and I died for you.
Yet I walk this land again,
Once more free of my deadly chain.
But where are you my love?
Why are you still in the skys above?
Together in death, I swore
Just to feel you once more.
But my death, it seems, was denied to me.
If in miserable life, I will forget you, will you forgive me?
Copyright ©
DukeW
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2009-04-05 05:22:57]
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Re: Guilty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:49:52 AM AEST
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Definitely some very intersting thoughts to ponder upon.
Thank you for an enjoyabel read.
Tim |
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Re: Guilty
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 01:39:48 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I feel so many differenct emotions reading this. Love, hurt, regret and more. Very rare to find such honesty in emotion on such a level you have brought this poem to. Thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Guilty
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 11:47:50 PM AEST
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Good to see you posting again, my friend.
Good work.
huggs, blessings, stay safe,
emy |
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