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one wish
Contributed by
awock
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Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 03:06:44 PM in AEST
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if I had one wish
what would it be
so far in my life
I have thought about 3
the first immortality
to live long worry free
never aging a minute
how great that would be
the second was peace
no war, no dying screams
no threats of disaster
oh what a world it could be
yet still my last thought
most important of the 3
my dream made real
and her love for me
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awock
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2009-04-06 15:06:44]
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Re: one wish
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 03:12:11 PM AEST
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sweet and dreamy, good work.
-phil |
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Re: one wish
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by keikori on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 03:48:41 PM AEST
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| very well done, and perhaps if you're having girl issues you should write them poetry, it's a major turn on, and you're a good writer |
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