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Dance
Contributed by
crmnlilbruno
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Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 12:55:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Forever lost in an emotional dance
Every step taken is taking a chance
Dips and lifts come and go
Stumbles and spins interrupt the flow
Hand in hand moving along
Moving smoothly to life's Love song
Learning to dance with one another
Learning to forget about all others
Taking another step towards the end
Allowing each other to be a friend
Accepting each other as the one
Will bring chances to have more then fun
Following the steps of each others leads
Helps to satisfy both your needs
Dips, lifts, stumble and spin
Done together bolt you win
Winning true love in an emotional dance
Allows the beauty of true romance
So take each others hand
And start to dance were you stand
If done together It can't go wrong
Dance together in life's love song...
Aaron D. Carman
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crmnlilbruno
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2009-04-07 00:55:33]
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Re: Dance
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 09:29:34 PM AEST
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Very clear message here, very nice flow easy on the eyes, well done.
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Re: Dance
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 05:58:00 AM AEST
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Beautifull dancing.
Awesome write.
huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Dance
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 07:24:39 PM AEST
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| The paired lines, AA, BB, CC, etc, rhyme, gave it that sing-songy feel, which felt quite appropriate given the topic. Good job to you mr. Aaron D. Carman. |
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