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Fantasy
Contributed by
amicus
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Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 09:07:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I see to soak
In your last breath
Try not to miss it
As it slowly fades
My last memory
Of this troubled life
So convenient
To see you die
That story of life
Made by your own tears
Held strong by fears
Quiver again
So very close now
To your sad death
Envision hope
False fantasy
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amicus
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2009-04-08 09:07:12]
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Re: Fantasy
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by Jerr-Bear on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 10:48:00 AM AEST
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wohw...
thats incredibly deep
and absolutely amazing..
love it (: |
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Re: Fantasy
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 03:02:40 PM AEST
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chilling but beautiful i think.
-Phil |
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