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The Hunter
Contributed by
manbeast
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Saturday, 11th April 2009 @ 04:56:18 PM in AEST
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I am a hunter at my core,
It is my source and founding,
And when I put my boots afield
it sets my heart to pounding.
Theres nowhere that Id rather be
than with my hound a bounding
through brush and creek and oer the hills,
and hear her when shes sounding.
From desk and task I must escape
Or lose the soul within me.
This longing that I can not stay
Is but the foal of envy,
Of simpler times and simpler men
Whose freedom much I fancy,
To come and go without a clock
And through the woods go dancing.
Dillon Wilson Staas III copyright 2009
Copyright ©
manbeast
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Re: The Hunter
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 08:28:58 AM AEST
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wow this was fantastic writing my friend, brilliant and inspiring, i loved the true sense of pure freedom you expressed and clearly yearned for in this piece, i really got that sense, each line was just great, i feel that you have a real passion for writing and(if its not fictional) hunting also and this comes across in a great poem. fabulous writing!!!
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Re: The Hunter
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by kye on
Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 05:28:57 PM AEST
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Bravo! Bravo! Well this poem of your was a delight. At the beginning of your poem, I thought the context would be about an alpha male but it was really about a hunter's instinct and the freedom it brings in it's escape.
A lovely poem indeed.
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Re: The Hunter
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 02:29:45 AM AEST
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Hmmm.. thought I commented on this one the other day. Must have gotten distracted. So, what I like about this besides being very nicely written is this trip into the sounds of nature. Thank you for bringing us along.
Welcome to YPDC.
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Re: The Hunter
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by freckle on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:28:49 PM AEST
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Very clever poem! The tempo was nice and kind of reminded me of the way a hound would got trotting out for a hunt.
I enjoyed it very much and will read your other posts.
Thanks for sharing!
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