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Lost in the Music
Contributed by
Tanna
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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The sad sweet strains of the violin
Float effortlessly into the room
A lone figure transforms
As the music begins to consume
His frail body begins to bend and sway
On his face, a look of rapture
Created from his arthritic hands
Comes a beauty only he's been able to capture
His hands speak a different language
A union of peace and passion
Intensity of feelings
Each warring in a fashion
The notes all blend in harmony
As the music reaches higher strains
He plays this piece from memory
But his wonder still remains
He evolves into a younger man
Inspired by the song
Elegant in his stance
Arthritic hands now strong
This sentimental melody
Yet again brings this man peace
He loses himself in the music
Giving in to that soulful release
Copyright ©
Tanna
... [
2003-03-26 01:05:00]
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Re: Lost in the Music
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:30:14 AM AEST
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| Tanna .. this is an exceptional write - a beautifully written poem with such lovely images. ... Jan |
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Re: Lost in the Music
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 03:00:52 AM AEST
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| wonderful.. beautiful .. really exceptional..venkat |
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Re: Lost in the Music
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:29:58 AM AEST
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Absolutely brilliant. Such amazing imagery created form beautifully crafted phrases.
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Re: Lost in the Music
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by Jester on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:27:37 PM AEST
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| Mmm, I love the vision you have created within my mind, as I said in the message that you are beautiful it takes a pure strain of beauty to capture the imagery that it takes to create a poem like this. It's something that speaks to the heart as well as the mind. ::two thumbs up:: |
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Re: Lost in the Music
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 11:05:45 AM AEST
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| outstandingly beautiful! |
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Re: Lost in the Music
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 10:56:55 AM AEST
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Very evocative and as usual a perfect scan (except for verse 2 line 4. I hope you will not be offended at my crticism but why not
A beauty only he can capture
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