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you decide
Contributed by
isaacr
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Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 01:05:38 PM in AEST
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tears don't exist in my life
only .5 and .7 millimeter lead
my true emotions are not heard or read
but only written in a way that i myself can't even comprehend
it seems as if my life goals have devolved from living in a stable environment...
to being infused with enough alcohol to fall asleep on a daily basis
still they are not met
happiness only existed once i accepted the distress
i became older,more knowledgeable and more deeply entangled in my own unsolved problems
yet
i cant avoid optimism as much as i imagine would help
i have concepts stuck in my head and continue to believe ludicrous ideas
while i seek the companionship of a genuinely good female
and i am stereotypically evil
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Re: you decide
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by 3660Days on
Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:33:13 PM AEST
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your strong point is definitely with strong and unexpected (and original) imagery, like these:
tears don't exist in my life
only .5 and .7 millimeter lead
to being infused with enough alcohol to fall asleep on a daily basis
and i am stereotypically evil |
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