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The falling dream
Contributed by
Arty_Sydney
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A crumbly brown maple leaf
with certain shades of green
falls down from an immensly glorious tree
landing on the street
a dampened road - not so clean
some gravel and some sheen
brought by the oil of a man made dream
distruction it may seem
it is a leaf,
a leaf
the falling dream
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Arty_Sydney
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2003-03-26 01:25:00]
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Re: The falling dream
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 05:49:02 AM AEST
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| I liked the comparison here ... good write ... keep writing my friend |
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Re: The falling dream
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:53:39 PM AEST
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Interesting analogy....Welcome to YPDC...
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