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L.(osing) O.(ther) V.(iolent) E(xpressions)
Contributed by
wood
on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 06:31:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whats happening
Why do i feel this way
This sensation
This person
This spell shes got me under
Magic.........No
She feels the same way i do
All thoughts tip-toe through my mind
All the while we are intertwined
The conjoining of spirit and body
soul and being And.............
In these final throws of rapture
Before our raw entities are fused permanantly
........................... I catch myself falling.........................
Red
........A Stream
Bigger...... A river
Bigger......A lake
Though I am not moving closer
Bigger and Bigger
.............. A sea
.............. An ocean
I must decide
Proceed or retreat?
Doesn't take long
I keep falling
Soon drowning In the most sinful happiness
We end and yet we begin
I wake up.......................
Damn
mebey ill find you someday
L.O.V.E.
Copyright ©
wood
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2009-04-14 18:31:11]
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Re: L.(osing) O.(ther) V.(iolent) E(xpressions)
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by The_Phantom on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 09:22:42 PM AEST
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Very nice write I enjoyed the read.
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Re: L.(osing) O.(ther) V.(iolent) E(xpressions)
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by crmnlilbruno on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:42:21 PM AEST
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| Interesting.. I like how you used the periods to symble the pause in reading... Good write |
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