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Why Do You Come Back?
Contributed by
dhart420
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Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:46:04 AM in AEST
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Why do you come back for more?
More rhymes
line after line
You laugh and you cry
time after time
Words grouped together
Each in their respective places
Forming stunning visualizations
As words seem to jump off the pages
Movies played out
In front of our faces
The stories we read
Each started as a seed
Creativity
Now mature
The artist hopes
but isn't sure
If their opinions
Concur with yours
Me personally
I really don't care
I broadcast my emotions
Into the air
Just wanted to let everyone know
So you can watch my show
I'll keep you guessing
Which way my emotions will go
I'll make you happy
I'll make you sad
I get obnoxious
And I make you mad
Thats alright
Thats ok
You don't have to like me anyway
But if you hate
Let me know what for
So next time I may do it more.
Copyright ©
dhart420
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2009-04-15 00:46:04]
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Re: Why Do You Come Back?
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by crmnlilbruno on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 12:51:35 AM AEST
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| HA! Great Work.. I found it funny, easy to read and well writen.... |
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Re: Why Do You Come Back?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 03:46:33 AM AEST
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That was fah-nee!!! And rather creative. :-)
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Why Do You Come Back?
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by razorbladekisses on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 08:43:19 PM AEST
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Hahaha. I love how you seem so sarcastic sometimes. Creative.
I am looking forward to more! ;D
RBK |
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