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Dust
Contributed by
Innocent_Sinner
on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 02:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Forever is an awfully long time
But I'd gladly spend it with you
The days could pass in seconds
And I wouldn't care; as long as I'm with you
A year has almost passed
And I still can't get enough
Your scent, your taste
You're the most divine creature
A lot has been said between us
Everything has been shared
There have been fights,
But we always make up
We spent nearly a week away from them
All the people who judge us
And that week made us stronger,
Made me and you pull together
I love you, my dear
From the bottom of my heart
With every ounce of my being
With all my heart and soul
I love the way you love me so purely
Though you say the love isn't pure
I believe that we could run away
That we should leave all the rest
There isn't much else I could say
Other than I love you
The way that you make me feel
I simply cannot deny
Though love is defined many ways
I cannot find one simple definition
That matches how I feel about you
Love has no boundries for us
Without you, there is no air
There is no sun
There is no life
I am a simple lifeless shell without you
Made of dust
That drifts in the nonexistant wind...
Copyright ©
Innocent_Sinner
... [
2009-04-15 14:40:17]
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Re: Dust
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 03:31:37 PM AEST
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| I actually quite enjoyed this. Some parts felt repetative, like it could have been 2/3 as long and maybe had a more concentrated impact, but overall I think it held together quite nicely. NIcely done, I hope to read more soon. |
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Re: Dust
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by wood on
Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 03:59:48 PM AEST
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great work keep crackin at it though i see potential
~Freshmen 012 |
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Re: Dust
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 06:44:39 AM AEST
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i like the freedom and power of this write, good job.
-Phil |
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Re: Dust
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by MoonlightKiss on
Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 11:25:23 AM AEST
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omg...!
*blushes* |
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