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Forever One
Contributed by
manbeast
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Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 03:37:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I grow old, and fear Im dated.
You see a man whos stood the test of time.
I grow tired, and fear Im fading.
You see a man whose strength is in his years.
You grow old, and see your gray hair.
I see the trials we have overcome.
You grow tired, and see your wrinkles.
I see the good times weve been blessed to share.
We grow old, but were together.
Together we have sailed the seas of change
We grow tired, into that dark night.
And I thank God we go forever one
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manbeast
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2009-04-17 03:37:18]
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Re: Forever One
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:53:44 PM AEST
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This is so sweet.
I adore the fact that your luv is for ever.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: Forever One
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:54:23 PM AEST
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Very nice. I really like this one..
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Forever One
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by irodethetrain2u on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 12:24:39 AM AEST
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| beautiful and touching! |
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Re: Forever One
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by freckle on
Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:35:21 PM AEST
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I like this one too. I just don't like it as much as your other two. It seems a little forced to me. Like you knew what you wanted to say; but not quite how you wanted to say it.
Good write though and as always, thanks for sharing!
Carol
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Re: Forever One
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 07:14:36 PM AEST
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An adorable write it made me smile.
Love is beautiful.
Michelle |
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