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Victim of Love
Contributed by
windowguy
on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 01:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Slap a padlock on my mind
If you can only but try,
My thoughts cannot be confined,
This freedom you wont deny.
Am I so small, so fragile a Bird,
Unnoticed, with a broken wing?
So weak to utter a noble word,
Unable to sweetly sing?
No! Theres so much to learn,
Inside theres a tender heart;
Passions deep within do burn,
Just havent had chance to start.
Dont think you can control
My life in every way,
I am a patient, but strong soul
Just waiting for the day
When retribution will call,
Then release, as from a cage
And freedom to walk tall
With no more seething rage.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2009-04-19 13:28:46]
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Re: Victim of Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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good writing, i especially liked the final paragraph.
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