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A state of Flux
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 10:40:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Everything awry no matter how hard I try
I am a man and I want to cry
My heart bleeds the pain it brings
Then she smiles and everything sings
The confusion state remains within
To decide if to cast it in the bin
Or to wait and punch on through
Where to take it and what to do
So I sit, I ponder and wait in my cell
The jigsaw puzzle on which to dwell
Pieces that seem to fit are all askew
This state of flux to me so new
I still pray it is me she will want
So I will pretend I am in the hunt
And perhaps in some quirk of fate
She will say yes and be my date.
Monday, 20 April 2009
2:32:05 PM
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Re: A state of Flux
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 03:33:48 PM AEST
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i like this, it had a certain something to it.
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