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I Know
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 12:32:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I know you're scared; I hear your whimpers of fear Please don't cry; I will wipe away every tear Tell me what's wrong, because I am listening my dear I hate seeing anyone so sad that's so near. I know you're afraid; I feel you trembling against me Please, cry into my shoulder as much as you need And I will hold you, safe in my arms; don't flee You're secure and warm, protected from misery.
I know what's happened to you in the past How many times you've been broken, hurt and slashed And I know of the betrayal from the last I saw how he treated you; like his useless trash. Can you take in my words, take my promise to heart Because I want to help keep you from falling apart And you should know that I've been devoted from the start You're a unique beauty, a perfect work of art.
Beneath your tough exterior, I knew you are weak And you say you're abandoned; you say you've grown bleak Let your actions talk, shh girl, don't speak There's no reason to search, because I'm who you seek. I know you believe you don't deserve another try But I think different; and as life passes us by I will love you; girl, don't be shy And as long as I'm here, you will never cry.
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MoonlightKiss
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2009-04-20 12:32:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Know
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 03:31:02 PM AEST (User
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a passionate, flowing poem. a really enjoyable read. well done.
-phil |
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Re: I Know
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 06:59:49 AM AEST (User
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I like the passion you express in your poems. In this one the sound and flow of the line "Let your actions talk, shh girl, don't speak" appeals to me. |
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