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Life Story
Contributed by
JuniorWise
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Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 01:31:02 PM in AEST
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My mind is made up of too many fallacies
False emotions, corrupt logic, to the end of reality
Blinded by the sight of whatever I could be
Only makes it worst, till the point I made a rivalry
I made a rival to the world, its pretty treasures and its pearls
It's satisfaction never completes the swirls
Of the ideas floating through my mind
My prime target is not to shine, but to create a level
Where my good music is appreciated to the angels
Curse all the devils who oppose lyrics and stylistic flow
That forever was given to me, but where will I go
If i can't put on a show, I'm lost, I'm hindered to the obstacles
That made the nation go greedy, but I'm an apostle
Due to the fact that my reasoning is so illogical
I may never be understood as if it was impossible
I may as well give up, there's no point of trying when you don't have a chance
But if your chance actually comes, you're caught up in a trance
And you'll live on life as another worthless fan
Then regrets come by, I wish I was alive
The feeling for the strive only supported my drive
To conquer my territory, the most unordinary person you've ever met
Is now set, on his hobby to become a renowned artist
And paint a picture of his life's dream, that gleamed into the eyes of another soul's
That took his position and stole his condition
And accomplished his mission with no connection and no correction
But with a board and some sounds, this kid became renowned
And he has his whole town banging off his beats
Got the bully off of him, got back on his feet, left the streets
And ended up receiving a G.O.O.D oppurtunity
Copyright ©
JuniorWise
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2009-04-20 13:31:02]
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Re: Life Story
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th April 2009 @ 03:12:03 PM AEST
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some good phrases in here like 'False emotions, corrupt logic, to the end of reality' and 'It's satisfaction never completes the swirls, Of the ideas floating through my mind'. i see a lot of potential in your writing, good work.
-phil
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