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a weight off my chest
Contributed by
justme03
on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 04:41:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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like an elephant in the room it sits there.
and we go about our business and try to ignore it,
but nothing will take away from what i did to you.
everything is the same, but
EVERYTHING is different.
how to go back to what we once had?
how do i move something back into place
when it is massive and unmovable?
lost for the right words to say to you.
i dont know how to make this better.
maybe i cant, but please give me another chance.
i know ive had so many already,
and i dont deserve another one.
but just know i do love you.
and if you love me too we can get through this.
i will do everything in my power to prove that i love you.
i didnt do what i did because i dont love you.
baby, you know there were other reasons.
none of it had anything to do with you.
but , i guess in a way. . .it was about you.
about you in the way that i cant be what you want me to be.
and im sorry.
its tearing me apart. . .
but change is in the air.
i can taste it on my lips.
just wait. . .
please. . .wait.
i would wait for you.
my love.
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Re: a weight off my chest
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 05:45:08 PM AEST
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You captured a pouring of feeling heart and soul within this write.
Maybe you should show it to the person ey??
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Re: a weight off my chest
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by RyhmeNotReason on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 01:26:21 AM AEST
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| been there justme03.. this one really touched a nerve.. I guess thats the sign of good writing. By the way... I agree with michelle, kinda silly to share it with us and not the person it was written for. |
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Re: a weight off my chest
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by justme03 on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 10:04:38 AM AEST
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| im too scared to show it to him. it seems he doesnt understand my poetry at all. he just kinda laughs and makes me feel like im a horrible writer. :( maybe thats not what it really is...but thats what i feel. idk how to really explain that. thanks for your comments. |
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