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Perception
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:24:52 PM in AEST
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Face values, touch of hand.
We "embrace" our differences.
Though.... indepth of being
hidden intentions
seem to take us aback.
We fight "the dragons"
wonder through the forests edge
stumble along the way.
Our current flowing as the rivers run.
Indulged in value
doing whats right.
Beneath the timbers
ashes blow, flames ignite.
What is it for?
When striving for perfection
the ideal moment.....
the lost moment
the blister of hand
crack of heart?
To be aware
once more.....
perception of others
was not in the highest of regard
in which you placed it.
Take them down
they lose their spot
pedestals crumble
sweep up their rubble
look around at the aftermath.....
breath once more
whats done is done
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-04-22 18:24:52]
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Re: Perception
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by RyhmeNotReason on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:50:47 PM AEST
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*clap clap clap* Bravo michelle
"Indulged in value
doing whats right.
Beneath the timbers
ashes blow, flames ignite"
- vivid imagery.... loved it |
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Re: Perception
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:54:14 PM AEST
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wow this is really really good.. it gets you deep down.. makes you realize about life.. good job here
Vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Perception
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 07:39:06 PM AEST
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All this is life..hard realities..
O.K my friend, I will follow your idea..
I breath once more whats done is done.
Love and blessings.:-)venkat |
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Re: Perception
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:35:58 AM AEST
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everything that you said is true especially the last two lines.
Take a deep breath, Whats done is done...
very well done my friend
Rich |
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Re: Perception
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:39:59 AM AEST
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Yep, people wil ultimately, in the end, show their true colors.
Very well written, Michelle. |
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Re: Perception
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by thezenmonkey on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 06:01:00 AM AEST
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You'll never change whats been and gone.
Whats done is done!
Wildly vivid imagery I could picture the scene.
WICKED!!!!!
Joe |
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Re: Perception
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 06:36:47 AM AEST
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Once more the poets superb pen
has instill a beauty to these pages,
leaving no artistic stone, unturned . . .
lovely work shel . . .
((((Michele))))
ty likewise 4 your read.
Ben . . . |
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Re: Perception
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by ever1der on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 09:47:27 PM AEST
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| a poet and a sage. I really enjoyed this write my friend. Toward the end did you mean breathe ... or did you mean to say breath? Anyway, I really liked it. |
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