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I've had enough
Contributed by
thezenmonkey
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Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 06:21:01 AM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Go on kill me now, Ill just lay down and die, you think youve had enough well so have I! Ill take nothing with me, theres nothing you can give me, that Ill be grateful for for I dont care about anything anymore, I hear a knock on my door Go Away!! I dont even know you any more, why are you knocking on my door, why the clock is still tick tocking for I can never be sure but I dont care anymore!!
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2009-04-23 06:21:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I've had enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 07:53:00 AM AEST (User
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Even without the bad language, I can still feel the anger and frustration...good job! |
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Re: I've had enough
(User Rating: 1 ) by AchingSoul on
Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 08:46:21 AM AEST (User
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This poem is really heartfelt!
Great poem :) |
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