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Whip-lashed
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
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Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:04:29 PM in AEST
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Teacher or passenger?
indifferent now to the question
one foot on the pedal
the other on the brake
whip-lashed and silent
the driver, observant
imaginary summer
for the winter is too cold
blind in the inherent beauty
the storm brings new life
baal knew of this
but that was years ago
when I didnt look
for the door handle
for a way to smell the air
to be human is to sit
to be alive is to stand
to be alone is to stand
and so indifference is the key
to ignorance of the whip-lash
the stop-start-stop-start
the who cares anymore?
-T. C. Lubcke Jr 24/04/2009
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Re: Whip-lashed
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 02:04:45 AM AEST
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Interesting write, the title is what drew me into this write.
I am going to read it once more. I kind of got lost in it.
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