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Gathering My Heart
Contributed by
manbeast
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Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 01:36:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Gathering my head,
the pieces from the sky,
dont know if I will find them,
I know Ive got to try.
Gathering my sorrow,
I find it everywhere.
Dont think Im going to make it,
yet no one seems to care.
Gathering my courage
I face another day.
My heart begins to tell me
the pain is here to stay.
Gathering my heart,
the pieces from the floor,
if ever I should find them,
Ill lend my heart no more.
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manbeast
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2009-04-24 01:36:36]
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Re: Gathering My Heart
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by shelby on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 01:56:38 AM AEST
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Are you in my head? LOL
uh hummmm sorry.....
This is again nicely written, meter is perfect,
(something I suck at lol) and it is so sad and touching. I relate to this and the feelings within its verse and its heart!
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Re: Gathering My Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:07:30 AM AEST
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executed with finesse i thought. good work.
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Re: Gathering My Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 07:09:22 AM AEST
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| I really like the resonating imagery of gathering and going on. The poem is sad yet hopeful. |
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Re: Gathering My Heart
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by MoonlightKiss on
Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 12:29:20 PM AEST
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| wow, very moving write. great job |
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