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Untitled
Contributed by
jlokitty
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Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:33:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I pull the blade
As the tears roll down my face
I'm slowly starting to fade
How'd I get to this place?
Am i out of my mind?
Have I lost control?
Must I be blind?
Im falling into an empty dark hole.
Someone please help me out
Shoving my fingers down my throat is not helping
I wanna scream, i wanna shout
Crying and yelping
So far from being pretty
At least I can make my wrist look nice
I'll draw a little picture
Maybe I'll cut just once, or maybe twice...
The blood is dripping
I feel the satisfaction and pride
I feel the blade slipping my skin is ripping
Then realize this is something i'll need to hide
How's this helping?
Why can't i stop?
I'm filled with fear
And cannot stop shaking
Whats wrong with me?
Why is my heart aching?
Why won't the pain leave?
All my unhappinesss,
It's all hidden under my sleeve...
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jlokitty
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2009-04-24 16:33:22]
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Re: Untitled
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by Lizz on
Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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this poem is mixed with all the thoughts you have. its great how you could mix it all together. honestly i like it as is. although, more could be added.
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