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day by day
Contributed by
Destiny
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Pathetic as things go
when you're back up by no one
no one cares
you're that kid in the corner
the one no one cares aboutthe one who goes through life as an empty shadow
meaningless
no one cares about what you do or sat
you're the one left behind to rot
the couldn't care less
and they walk away
and when they come back
here you'll be
lieing where they left you
no need to get up
you could cut your wrists
and run around
blood flowing from your finger tips like scarlet waterfalls
they'd pretend not to care
maybe they're not pretending
Copyright ©
Destiny
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2003-03-26 14:25:00]
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Re: day by day
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:39:11 AM AEST
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Scarlet waterfalls eh? Great imagery. If people don't care, they are not worth your time. Concentrate on people who DO care.
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Re: day by day
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by mystical_illusion on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:18:12 PM AEST
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I liked your poem, very creative and full of emotion.
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Re: day by day
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:42:34 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem it was sad, but it was nicely written. |
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