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liberation
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 27th April 2009 @ 07:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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outside the limits
of time & space
a shield is cast, aboard.
rescinding plats
of counterfitted weight
unbalanced, taunt
agape in aftermath. . .
respite. . . corrosion
but as seeds scatter
dust. . . of principalities
looming. . . lost upon the air.
no sound
no friction
no doubt
no matter
the bow is stealth
harp string. . . strung bare.
the quiver, donates.
the prize
always
that cleverness
does not strike
& so, outwits the snare.
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-04-27 19:26:57]
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Re: liberation
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 06:58:20 AM AEST
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Enjoyed this well done presentation of seriously tight thought-provocation. I love it when cleverness gits beat. Lifts my heart!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: liberation
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 01:36:34 PM AEST
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I mirror Ken here,
harp string, strung bare, the quiver, donates
that in itself is so super.
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Re: liberation
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 09:23:12 AM AEST
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However the snare can strike and keep quite the beat. Cleverness, startled, yipes out "Who ha, wha was that?!" Snare snickers and runs leaving cleverness behind coughing in dust.
Take care,
Sonorman
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