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Love at first fight
Contributed by
terence
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Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 05:18:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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We were best friends who liked each other very much
Talked everything which coming to our mind
Things I liked, things I hate she knew better than anyone else
Felt everything is possible when she was by my side
We believed that we would meet the right person one day
Attitude towards the love was the same way
Having patience will give us the great love one daybut
Only thing we never had the same view was right person
One day she said that she liked someone and wants my opinion
As usual I was against and said he is not the right person
We were arguing for hours and she asked why are you doing this for me
Then I said..I.Love you
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terence
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2009-04-28 05:18:17]
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Re: Love at first fight
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 12:06:32 PM AEST
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I have found many writes here today that have made me smile. This is another one of them.
I liked how you brought it along and the story like air
to it.
The ending is perfect.
Have a great day
Michelle |
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