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My New Best Friend
Contributed by
mamasmurf
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Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Today I met a great new friend
Who knew me right away
It was funny how she understood
All I had to say
She listened to my problems
She listend to my dreams
We talked about love and life
She'd been there, too, it seems
I never once felt judged by her
She knew just how I felt
She seemed to just accept me
And all the problems I'd been dealt
She didn't interrupt me
Or need to have her say
She just listened very patiently
And didn't go away
I wanted her to understand
How much this ment to me
But as I went to hug her
Something startled me
I put my arms in front of me
And went to pull her nearer
And realized that my new best friend
Was nothing but a mirror.
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mamasmurf
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2003-03-26 16:25:00]
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Re: My New Best Friend
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 06:04:13 AM AEST
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Great twist at the end. It is funny how you can be your own best friend and your own worse enemy. This is my fvourite that I have read so far today. Good work.
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Re: My New Best Friend
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 06:49:50 PM AEST
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| ahh wonderful write:) welcome to ypdc too, your writing friend nessa |
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Re: My New Best Friend
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:41:29 PM AEST
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loved it, perfectly written, thank you for sharing
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Re: My New Best Friend
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by vincy on
Tuesday, 24th June 2003 @ 01:56:52 AM AEST
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It is true that some things inside
can only be understood by ones own self,
by the way the great new friend you met
is really a good old friend is she not? |
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