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The Voices
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 09:49:05 PM in AEST
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So many choices
Of things to do
Then I hear the voices
Telling what I should do to you
I can't decide what to do
To many choices in life
So I listen to the voices in my head
But they tell me they want you dead
Voices bringing in the evil thoughts
Making my mind rot
There may be to many choices
But I can't break down and listen to the voices
They are the demon inside
They are the malevolent spirit I hide
They are the voices in my head
They help with some choices but what do I do when they want you dead?
I have a dark side
That is getting harder to hide
I can't let you see
What the voices are making of me
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Voice of the Silent
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2009-05-01 21:49:05]
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Re: The Voices
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by anomalei on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 08:51:53 AM AEST
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i like this, a lot.
you are wonderful.
*JAE~ |
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Re: The Voices
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 12:20:41 PM AEST
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you conveyed 'voices in the head' very well with some inventive writing.
-Phil |
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Re: The Voices
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by TeRrahiel on
Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 03:30:15 AM AEST
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| Well, after reading this I was close to feel like a paranoid person:P I nearly heard voices in my head:) |
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