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Wake Me Now, But Rather Later
Contributed by
crookedpoet09
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Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 01:32:27 PM in AEST
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Beyond my eyelashes, lies a sea of ideas
And I shall take one and plant it into reality
When the time comes, it will unravel a mystery
And turn heads from here until the end for sheer
Madness in the rain, the thunder moves my sweat
Papers come clean as I write them all down
Confusion, deletion, tears fall to the ground
To destroy all the frowns, pay off the debt
I'm trying to succeed inside a prison, however
Does that make this light a hidden darkness Brother?
Help me to stand on this rotten soil, get out of bed
It's been the God that hangs over my breath
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2009-05-02 13:32:27]
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Re: Wake Me Now, But Rather Later
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by summer-zhong on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 04:13:00 PM AEST
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Re: Wake Me Now, But Rather Later
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 05:06:30 PM AEST
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a quality poem. a nice rhyme scheme that helped it to flow, but at the same time it didn't feel forced. good work.
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