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Shades of Autumn Gold (The Fall USA)
Contributed by
thewizard
on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 10:56:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Rolling fields, forest in breeze
Monuments tall, beautiful trees
Leafy branches, once overflowing
Summer colours, now slowly going
Whistling wind, through tree top
Leaves of summer, start to drop
Tinted green, falling to ground
Gently floating, making no sound
Trees uncovered, in impending cold
With summer passing, autumn unfolds
Branches bare, woods once dark
All can be seen, is naked bark
Woodlands, once green and lush
Now silence throughout, deathly hush
Leaves give pleasure, to behold
Shades of yellow, autumn gold
Back to earth, whence they came
Forests wait, for life again
Birds long gone, trees forlorn
Awaiting spring, again reborn
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thewizard
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2009-05-02 22:56:31]
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Re: Shades of Autumn Gold (The Fall USA)
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 05:04:31 AM AEST
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some wonderful imagery coupled with a very nicely execute rhythmic scheme gives this piece a charming autumnal grace!!
keep it up great writing!!! |
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