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seclusion of seduction
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 05:10:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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delicate balance
secret. . . unknown
seclusion, our best friend.
how?
may I begin to say goodbye?
perhaps
thank you, my brother.
we disappointed
each other.
forgive.
do not grieve.
what we loose
comes round in yet
another form.
meet me in some other
lovers' eyes
melting as sunlight
from the sun
as moonbeams
spinning love undone.
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-05-03 17:10:06]
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Re: seclusion of seduction
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by navydocny on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 07:19:33 PM AEST
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Love this...
The setup with the type is wonderful....
One of your best!
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Re: seclusion of seduction
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by Spike on
Sunday, 3rd May 2009 @ 08:20:27 PM AEST
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elle,
no regrets, huh? lovely mix of letting go for another turn.
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Re: seclusion of seduction
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by one-curly-fry on
Sunday, 7th June 2009 @ 06:56:22 AM AEST
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you have an amazing use of words.. Reading this in my current state wasn't a good idea. It brings me close to tears. You truly understand connection as well. It seems all too fleeting in this world. My heart goes out to you. You honestly deserve a full love - because you have learnt enough to give as much.
Much respect.
Tim |
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