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I Gave up on Love
Contributed by
matariel
on
Wednesday, 6th May 2009 @ 09:06:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Me and you
You released yourself to me, seeking also what I desired
Sadly enough, my eulogy is sung in a thousand hearts
I gave up
I was no-good, and I learned to accept that fact of life
You suffered from the same dark and plaguing pathos
I don't know
What is right, what is wrong, and what just gets by
But they say that love covers a multitude of sins
I love you
I said those painful words to you today from my heart
These words should be happy sounds, not a cry for help
But it's true
I do love you; but I do not love myself, no, I don't
I deserve to be treated cruelly; It's what I understand best
Me, myself
Before I was born, I thought life would be pleasant
But submersed in the ocean, I gave up on love
Desire
That's what became the object which I sought
But not now, no-- not now, I honestly desire love
I don't
No, I don't expect you to stand by while I rehabilitate myself
Continue onward; I've given up, but I just want you to know that
I love you
Copyright ©
matariel
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2009-05-06 21:06:29]
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Re: I Gave up on Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 10:33:20 AM AEST
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inciteful writing.
-Phil |
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Re: I Gave up on Love
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by MissAnnonymous on
Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 10:47:57 AM AEST
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nice work,
keeps my interest from beginning to end, and I can relate to this too. |
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