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Snare
Contributed by
animosity
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Initial fear and crashing
Into what you laid out for me
Baited into the deep unknown
And fell headlong
For you
Entangled and Ensnared
But comfortable in your embrace
Affection is this lovely trap
And I gladly fall
Into you
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2003-03-26 23:45:00]
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Re: Snare
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:10:27 AM AEST
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| good stuff |
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Re: Snare
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:33:23 AM AEST
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| interesting write - i like the contrast between the language and the emotion. i enjoyed your other poems too, you put forward some raw emotions with unique style. and congrats on finding a sensitive side, lol. great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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Re: Snare
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by wrn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:44:44 AM AEST
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| You are indeed a talented and diverse author. I'm glad you shared with us! Look forward to your next assignment! |
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Re: Snare
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:06:27 AM AEST
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I really like the bit about "affection is this lovely trap". Really good work!!
sleepless_siren |
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