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Rain's Message
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 09:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Drip-drop the rain cascades down the glass;
it reminds me of a flowing waterfall in a tropical paradise.
The rain speaks a language all its own;
it has a hypnotic whisper as it crashes against the window.
Each drop has an eccentric voice;
whispers wash away the woe of winter.
Rain creates reflecting puddles shimmering future dreams.
It is a cleansing friend ensuring winter's end.
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lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-05-10 21:03:05]
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Re: Rain's Message
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 09:47:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful just like the rain.
Good work.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Rain's Message
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by windowguy on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 07:37:45 AM AEST
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| Good message. Positive for a change. Clever use of alliteration. Liked the "hypnotic whisper" thought. Nice piece. |
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