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A Broken Rock
Contributed by
funmi
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Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 09:53:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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when a part of me becomes you
I disappear into thin air
the heart I swore I did never forget
looses faith in me,
then you, become a rock
every word you speak
holds me to my feet,
I cant let go.
You define my beauty
Both inside and outside
Now I remember I were useable.
I forget the future
And live the moment.
Its a pity heart-breaks were invented.
When he goes
I realise there is just little part of me left
He defines my uselessness
I try to forget the past
And live the future
A flashback of love comes to my head
Then I realise what a fool I was.
A cry for hope stays in my mind
Trying to convince myself,
He was the one that was blind
Copyright ©
funmi
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2009-05-11 09:53:48]
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Re: A Broken Rock
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by Crookedpoet09 on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 12:16:49 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem! You did a marvellous job of painting a picture in my head, and I couldn't help reading it again and again. I can't wait for your next poem. Matt. |
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