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No One
Contributed by
trisha
on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When you cry
No one see your tears
When you are worried
No one see your pain
When you are happy
No one sees your smile
Fart just one time
I'll be there
Copyright ©
trisha
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2003-03-27 01:05:00]
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Re: No One
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by venkat on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:05:09 AM AEST
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| I don't understand the 7th line. .... venkat |
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Re: No One
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:13:39 AM AEST
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You are not the only one Venkat. I have no idea where that came from either!!
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Re: No One
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 09:49:50 AM AEST
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I agree I am just a little comfused
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Re: No One
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:08:35 AM AEST
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omg! trisha, what is wrong with you... i ahve to commend you because i have never laughed harder in my life...but seriously...that was just way too weird for me...
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Re: No One
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by Apartment213 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:11:28 AM AEST
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| im lost someone point me in the right direction. |
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Re: No One
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by exiled on
Wednesday, 7th May 2003 @ 01:40:43 AM AEST
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I get it.
exiled
better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not. |
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